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[原创] [JY Fiction]The Elementary World <更新到第四章上 第29楼>

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[JY Fiction]The Elementary World <更新到第四章上 第29楼>

Chapter 1. The beginning of everything

“Today will be a exciting day for the astronomy lovers, as we are very luckily in the best area to observe this total solar eclipse, and it will continue for about half an hour, the planetarium is organizing a exciting activity today for the astronomy lovers to observe this rare astronomical phenomena, as the eclipse will appear in the afternoon…” as the weather reporter announced, a person in the shadow said in a low voice: “Everything may begin from this moment.”

“Oh no!!!!!! How come the weather turns out to be like this? I’ve got to be hurry!” It was pouring outside. June had just finished her lecture, and grabbed her books and study materials and rushing towards the bus station. As the rain getting heavier, June complains with impatience, “How come there is not a single bus in 20 minutes? I need to get home early today! Come on!”

Just at this moment, there is a taxi coming towards the station, June opened her purse, and checked to see if there was enough money. “OK, have to go home by taxi now! Good!” She held up her hand and the taxi parked beside her.

June climbed into the taxi, told the driver where to go, and relaxed at the back seat.

“What kind of rain is this, so heavy! I guess the traffic must had been heavy today in this weather!” June begin to chat with the taxi driver.
“Yes, it was indeed really difficult. You must had been waiting for a long time in the station.” The driver said.
“Oh yes! 20 minutes without a single bus coming! I was so worried that I can’t get home on time. I’ve got an important visitor today.”
“I see. I see…” The driver said slowly.
“Oh, I just remembered that today we will be able to see the total sun eclipse! It is really rare, oh how exciting! I can’t wait to see that!” June said excitedly, since she’s a crazy astronomy lover.
“Oh! Didn’t know you are so interested!” The driver said in the astonishing tone.
“I’m a crazy astronomy lover you see. I used to be dreaming to be an astronaut you, ha ha.”
“Yes, indeed, indeed…” The driver smiled.

CRACK!

“Wow, that was a loud thunder! Scared me!” June nearly jumped up from her seat.
“Yes. He must be really angry.”
“Excuse me? Who is angry?” June wasn’t sure why there is a ‘He’ popped in.
“You will know, you will know……” The driver said quietly.
“I still don’t…… Excuse me, is this way the short cut or something? It doesn’t look familiar to me at all.” June had just found it’s got darker and darker as taxi drove through something looks like a narrow tunnel.
“Home is not important anymore, and it shouldn’t be where you are going anyway.”
“What? Please! Stop joking! I need to get home quickly!” An unpleasant feeling rose in June’s heart.
“This is where you should go, just follow me, and I will show you the real sun eclipse!” The driver turned his face towards June and said mysteriously.
“No! Let me out! Stop the car! Stop it now!” June shouted as the unpleasant feeling rose higher.
“You have no choice, there is no turning back!” The driver looked right into June’s eyes, said firmly.
“Stop the car! Stop……” June felt very scared when the driver’s eyes turned to white.

Suddenly, two bright light beams shot out from those white scary eyes, and penetrated June. She felt airy as if her weight had all gone, and her consciousness was fading, at last, she closed her eyes.

“Oh, my god! How come? How can it turned out to be like this? Is he OK? Please tell me he is Ok! Oh, my god!”                    ‘It sounded like a girl was sobbing, what had happened to her? Was he OK? What was wrong with the ‘He’ she mentioned?’
“Please don’t worry Bo, he will be fine!”                 ‘It sounded like a boy’s voice. It’s great that the ‘He’ is OK, he is OK isn’t he? At least the situation can’t be too bad.’
“I can’t believe this! I just can’t! How can he betray us? If it wasn’t because of him, Lan can’t be wounded so badly! I just don’t understand! He was leading us and helping us all the time wasn’t he? I just don’t understand!” The girl cried with sadness.              ‘Who is this person she’s talking about now? He betrayed them? Because of this the boy who is called Lan is wounded. Oh I see.’
“Bo, please be calm, this situation can not be changed at this stage. What we have to do now is to make sure Lan is fine.” The boy persuaded her, “You’ve got to get some rest. You haven’t been sleeping for 2 days now!”

‘The girl didn’t say anything after that, I guess she had been persuaded.’

“Knock knock.” Somebody is by the door.

“Oh hi, we’ve been waiting for you!” the boy said.
“How’s he doing?” A man was asking.
“He’s been like this for a day now, no sigh of waking up.” The Boy answered.
“Let me have a look.”             ‘The footsteps drew nearer, I can hear it.’

“He should be awake by now! Everything is fine. Except that he is still out of conscious.”
“What is wrong then?”
“Honestly, I don’t know.”
“But you are the doctor right? You have to have some ideas!” Bo cried.
“Bo!”
“I’m sorry, but all we can do is waiting.” The doctor said, “Ki, let me know when he wakes up.”
“I will, thank you doctor.”

‘The footsteps had drew further and the there is the sound of door closing, sounds like the doctor had left.’
“Uh!!!!”              ‘It pains like my head gonna split into two! This pain came so suddenly, I can not bear it!’

“Lan? Lan, are you OK?”               ‘Oh, is that boy awake now? Gosh, I couldn’t bear this pain!’
“Lan! Lan!!! Wake up! Wake up please!” Bo starts crying again.
“Uh!!!”                  ‘This really kills! Am I going to die? Somebody come and save me please!’

‘Where is the light coming from? Uh, it is so bright! I can’t see!! Wait, my head doesn’t hurt anymore!’

“Oh, thank god you are OK man! We’ve been so worried!”           ‘Ah, I can see Ki now, although not very clear.’
“Lan! I’ve been so scared! Thank god you are awake! You are OK!”             ‘I can see Bo too!’

Why are these two people smiling at me?

“Where am I?”             ‘What? Is this my voice? Sounds like a boy! Had I caught a cold or something?’
“This is the hospital. You’ve been staying unconscious for a whole day now!” Ki told me.
“We’ve been staying with you through the day, the others are still in the battle. I’m getting worried about them now.” Bo said.
“The others? ”
“I will tell you about that later, we have to go now, here is not very safe. Can you get up now? I will help you get dressed.” Ki said.
“Yes, thank you.” I’m still feeling a bit weak, “But I can handle it by myself.”
“Are you sure? OK, clothes are by the mirror over there, we’ll wait for you outside.”
“Thank you, I won’t take too long.”

There is a big mirror by the door beside the cupboard, and there are some clothes placed on the table beside it.
“These are not my clothes! Anyway, better not let them wait. I think they will be able to tell me what had happened to me.”

June walked in front of the mirror and frozen when she saw the person reflected in the mirror.
“What… what… Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! Who… What… Who is this? Who am I?”
The person in the mirror is not the lovely and beautiful girl, but a tall, slim and very handsome boy.
“What had happening to me? I must have been dreaming! I have to go and ask them what had happened to me.” June got dressed quickly, and strangely, those unfamiliar cloths fit this boy’s body perfectly, as if these are made for especially for it.

With a bigger question in June’s head, she did not think too much of this, but rushed outside the room and find Ki and Bo waiting in the corridor.

“That was fast. OK, got to go now, don’t ask anything till we get home Lan.” Ki said ordered.
“Um… I’ve got a big question that I want to ask...” June said.           ‘Why is he calling me Lan?’
“I’m really sorry Lan, but we’ve got to go back to the base first, and we’ll tell you everything about what had happened.” Bo answered painfully.
“But…”         ‘She’s calling me Lan as well! That’s strange.’

They did not listen to June’s doubt, but dragged her towards the exit.
A few minutes later, they reached the outside of the building.
“We can’t naturalise, we have to go home by using the Entity World’s transport, just in case.” Ki said,
“What kind of …”
“Helicopter.” Bo chimed in.

In the mean time, a helicopter landed in front of them.
Ki climbed onto the pilot’s seat, June and Bo climbed and seated behind.
“Destination: the Base Castle!” Ki announced as the helicopter took off.



第二章待续......

[ Last edited by JUNEYEAH on 2005-10-30 at 17:37 ]


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我现在正在写第二章,争取在下周内发上来~呵呵~请多多评论。谢谢!


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Michael Scofield: If I were you I wouldn't mention that name again.
And then I'm gonna find out who's responsible for taking her life... and I'm taking theirs.
——For remembering the death of Sara Tencredi
Sara was alive! She will be back on 4th season!!! Nice!!!
Thought I might had just fallen in love with Severus Snape......
——For remembering the death of Severus Snape, and the Audiobook of HP7 is perfect! Loved it!

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i took a over view...........

alot of talking!
Look...............at.............me...........
请记住的遗言

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充满悬念的小说啊~~~~~万份期待下文~~~~
看完前辈的小说某紫都不敢用英文回复了........写得好棒!

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hey, you're using ur own name... is the story partly about yourself?

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我昨天把第二章写完了,但是还没有进行修改,所以暂时还不会发上来。
我写得不是很好,紫儿过奖了!嗬嗬~不过还是很高兴!谢谢!

其实这个小说的开头是我在以前的英文故事接龙里面写的,然后上A-Level的时候突然有了灵感就写了中文版的小说。然后最近又有了灵感就开始写英文的了。不过英文版的和以前的中文版的故事不一样,尤其是到了后面。
用我自己的名字的原因就是为了省事儿,我最不擅长取名字了!呵呵!


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Michael Scofield: If I were you I wouldn't mention that name again.
And then I'm gonna find out who's responsible for taking her life... and I'm taking theirs.
——For remembering the death of Sara Tencredi
Sara was alive! She will be back on 4th season!!! Nice!!!
Thought I might had just fallen in love with Severus Snape......
——For remembering the death of Severus Snape, and the Audiobook of HP7 is perfect! Loved it!

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hey, writing in Chinese, that must be something, i could never ever write a novel/fiction in Chinese! i'm so bad at it...

I can't do names either, everytime i think about it, i want to change the names again~~~~

hey, awaits for your fiction! =)

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Uh... it gonna be quite difficult for me to continue this and to translate this...... i think i'll write the english one first, since it is really time consuming translating this to chinese......

thanks, i'll send the send chapter here within next week.


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Michael Scofield: If I were you I wouldn't mention that name again.
And then I'm gonna find out who's responsible for taking her life... and I'm taking theirs.
——For remembering the death of Sara Tencredi
Sara was alive! She will be back on 4th season!!! Nice!!!
Thought I might had just fallen in love with Severus Snape......
——For remembering the death of Severus Snape, and the Audiobook of HP7 is perfect! Loved it!

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Chapter 2. Reaching the Base Castle

The helicopter flew some time which seems like an hour, when Ki said: “Hang on to something, there gonna be some jounce.”

June and Bo grabbed the handle beside them tightly.
“Look out! There’s a tornado in front of us!” June suddenly realised the reason why Ki had asked them to hold something.
“It’ll be fine. Don’t worry, just hold on tight!” Ki said.

But it is easier to be said than done, June got really nervous as they flew towards it.
‘Why he’s flying towards it? There’s no turning back if we get too near! What’s he thinking about?’
The helicopter is still heading towards the tornado.
“Ki, we are flying into it!” June was so frightened, she’s shouted.
“Yes, just hold on tight, we’ll be there in a sec.” Ki said easily.
‘What is he talking about??? Is he mad? I must stop him.’ But there was a huge bounce. It was lucky for June did what Ki was told, otherwise she would be threw out of her seat. The Helicopter started to wobble as if somebody was shaking it.
“Uh, I always hated this part of the flight!” Bo said displeased.
‘I bet nobody like this at all! By the way where are we now, what had happened?’
“We are inside the tornado at the moment, and we’ll be home right away! Home, sweet home!” Ki said delightedly which had just answered June’s doubt.
“What are you talking about…”
“Yeah, I know, Ki is a weirdo, since he is the only one loves this part of the flight! Oh no, I think I gonna be sick!” Bo chimed in without letting June finish her question, June looked at her and saw her face turned a bit green.

The helicopter stopped shaking suddenly. June looked out of the window, the sight amazed her: they are right in the middle of the tornado, she can see the spiral clouds fighting around them.
“Prepare to land!” Ki announced.
The helicopter started to descent.
It looked really weird with the helicopter flying in the centre of the tornado with the spiraling clouds floating around it, and at the same time with Ki piloted the helicopter with a huge smile on his face.
‘What a strange person he is!’ June sighed with emotion.
The helicopter landed smoothly. Suddenly they were surrounded by strong lights, which glared out the surroundings, June couldn’t open her eyes.
“We are home Lan.” Bo said to June with a smile.
Bo dragged June out of the helicopter, and walked away from it.
As June was acclimatized herself to the light, she saw the helicopter had disappeared, what instead of it was a helicopter model with a 6- coloured light ball glittered outside it.
“What had happened to the helicopter?” June asked with a surprise.
“Well, of course you didn’t know this, since you were always in the battle front. This is what we use when the situation is not safe for naturalising, we always use the transport from the Entity World instead, and this is specially designed for us to use. It belongs to the Base Castle. And I’ve got to mention that it is my favorite transport!” Ki answered with pride.
“What…”
“Yeah, nobody will be stranger than you to enjoy that kind of wobbly travel.” Bo wasn’t approved by it.
“Wait…..”
“How can you say no to this lovely piece of genius creation? It feels really good when u had naturalised for a long time!” Ki objected.
“Excuse…”
“That’s only what you think, weirdo’s interest!” Bo said unhappily.
“Um…”               ‘Why they don’t let me ask any questions? What are they talking about?’
“No, this is perfectly normal! Lan loves it too, don’t you Lan?” Ki turned the argument towards June.
“What? Oh, well, I do enjoy it most of the times but not including the journey we had today, I have to be honest in this, I do apologise for any uneasy feeling I brought to you. And I…” June said honestly and wanted to ask what was questioning her all the time, but Bo chimed in again.
“Ha ha ha! Did you hear what Lan said? Ha ha! The irony! You wanted Lan to support you, didn’t you?” Bo burst out laughing.
‘Uh, I give up! They never let me finish my sentences.’
“Oh stop it Bo, Lan said he does enjoy the flight most of the times!” Ki Justified.

“Hey what are you arguing about guys?” A boy asked from behind before Bo talked back.
“Hey Tsuchi, how are you doing? Finished?” Ki asked delightedly.
“Yeah, finally, it had been a long fight, but we managed to guard the Entity. I bet they won’t just give up like this.” Tsuchi said with a worrying expression.
“I just don’t understand. Why did he do that? Oh, I’m feeling terrible!” Bo said with sadness as if she hadn’t been joking a minute ago.
“Well, I think we’d better go back to the Base Castle first. I bet Lan is desperately wanting to hear everything as well. I’ll tell you what had happened in side.” Tsuchi turned around and lead them to the structure in front of them.
June was amazed when she realised what was sitting in front of her: a huge castle glowing with strong light. Now she realised the strong light appeared when the helicopter landed came from this castle. The scale of the castle is about the size of the House of Parliament in London! How come this castle is located in the centre of the tornado without a tiny damage? This is so unbelievable! And where is the light coming from? So strong! As if the castle itself is like the sun! And the form of it is so strange. It seems like it has 5 floors, and the shape of each floor is different as well!        ‘Where am I?’ June asked herself.

June followed Tsuchi, Ki and Bo walking towards the castle. When they nearly reached the castle, the light from the castle turned to seven colours and suddenly appeared in front of them formed what seems like a shield, blocked their way. It is so bright, it blurred June’s eyes. Tsuchi stopped and raised his hand touched the light shield, the light weakened suddenly, and the gate of the castle appeared before them.

It was a huge gate, it’s about fifteen metres tall and twenty metres wide. There was a big circle right in the middle of the rectangular gate, and what carved on it caught June’s eyes: right in the centre is the sun; what was around the sun is what seems like airflows, which is wind, though air should seems quite abstract when representing it, but June can tell it was airflows; the outer circle had been divided into 5 sections, each section presented a different picture: the one on the top was flames; the one on the centre left was drops of water; what on the centre right was trees; on the bottom left is earth; on the bottom right is gold.

Tsuchi raised his arm, and turned the back of his hand towards the gate: a light came out of the back of his hand and shone on the earth section of the circle of the gate. Then the light diffused onto the whole circle. At the same time seven coloured light beams shot out from the gap of the gate, and pushed the gate open.                   ‘Wow! How impressive! What amazed me most is that the light can actually push the gate! Wow! ’

“Welcome home, everybody had been waiting for your return.” Tsuchi said with a smile, and led them walked into the castle.

June started to observe the inside of the castle. What in front of her is a hexagon hall, each wall has a door and except the main gate each door has a sculpture was carved above it. The five figures looked like goddesses to June, and emitted senses of sublimity and holiness. In the centre of the hall was a big circle and there were 2 people standing inside it who were surrounded by different colours of lights.

“Hey Bo, Ki! Oh hi Lan, recovered yet?” One of them walked towards Tsuchi and his companions and said.                ‘Do they know Ki and Bo as well? I only can tell from the voice that this person is a boy, the light is too strong, I couldn’t see their face clearly.’
“Welcome back! We’ve been waiting for you for a long time. Thanks Tsuchi.” The other person followed the boy and said.             ‘Wow, what a sweet voice, she must be a lovely girl to have this kind of voice!’
“Hi Yan! Hi Jean!” Bo said happily and talked towards them.
“Uh, Bo starts complaining my precious heli again.” Ki grumbled about the argument he and Bo had when they landed in front of the castle.
Everybody laughed.

“Ki is the same as usual, isn’t he? Ha ha. Well, I see Lan’s back, so shall we begin then?” Tsuchi asked.
“Begin what?” I asked.
“Well, we are going to tell you what had happened when you were injured.” Yan said.
“What had happened to me? How come I woke up in the hospital?” June asked desperately.
“Well, as you know we were fighting with our enemies, and you were fighting with them in the front, and Hikaru was helping you. Although there were lots of enemies around, but with your two working together, there’ll be no worries at all. So we were doing back ups to reverting the Entity World which our enemies had damaged.” Tsuchi started to talk about what had happened.
“The damages are much more serious than we thought, although the battle is still going on, we had to use lots of Elementary Vigours to restore the damages We thought with your two, the situation couldn’t be too difficult. But just in this crucial situation, one thing had happened to everyone’s surprise.” Jean continued, “You were down. Nobody knows what happened, since everybody was doing their job restoring the Entity World’s state. The only thing we know is that the damages had suddenly increased, we felt really difficult when restoring them. When we turned around and saw the enemies besieged you, and Hikaru was gone.”
“So we hurried to rescue you first. But it was extremely difficult, since all of us had used more than half of our Elementary Vigours, and the enemy had only reduced less than a third. You were already out of conscious when we defeated most of the enemies who besieged you. We had never experienced this before, and we were really worried about your situation, so we asked Ki to send you to Dr. Nathan. Bo went to you when her job was done” Yan continued after Jean.
“Tsuchi, Yan and Jean, even our fairies came out of the Base Castle to join the fight in order to give Bo and I the chance to send you to Dr. Nathan. You were out of conscious for a whole day in the hospital, and then woke up today.” Ki conclude.
“Why? Why did he betray us? He was our leader wasn’t he? It was all because of his disappearance which made us fought with so much difficulty, and caused so much damage to Lan.” Bo cried again.
“Bo, things are not that easy. There are something worries me more, but I’m still trying to confirm that. I’ll tell everybody my doubt when I find the essential evidence.” Tsuchi said.



第三章待续: The Guardian of Wind

[ Last edited by JUNEYEAH on 2005-10-17 at 09:24 ]


HAP年度巨献:广播剧Living To Love You 第一集
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Michael Scofield: If I were you I wouldn't mention that name again.
And then I'm gonna find out who's responsible for taking her life... and I'm taking theirs.
——For remembering the death of Sara Tencredi
Sara was alive! She will be back on 4th season!!! Nice!!!
Thought I might had just fallen in love with Severus Snape......
——For remembering the death of Severus Snape, and the Audiobook of HP7 is perfect! Loved it!

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昨天晚上发疯把第三章也写完了。不过还在修改当中。
第二章不是很有意思,以后会越来越有趣的。


HAP年度巨献:广播剧Living To Love You 第一集
HAP年度巨献:广播剧Living To Love You 第二集
[有声书]Far Away Over The Sea——JY献给萝林的有声书


Michael Scofield: If I were you I wouldn't mention that name again.
And then I'm gonna find out who's responsible for taking her life... and I'm taking theirs.
——For remembering the death of Sara Tencredi
Sara was alive! She will be back on 4th season!!! Nice!!!
Thought I might had just fallen in love with Severus Snape......
——For remembering the death of Severus Snape, and the Audiobook of HP7 is perfect! Loved it!

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